Thursday, March 28, 2019

The looker-on

in he puna kawenga we have been
learning to write descriptions

To write descriptions you have to be good at noticing, observing
and wondering.We went around the school doing this then wrote poems inspired by...
Frank Kendon's the looker on.



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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 31, 2019 at 4:00 PM

    Hi Charmony
    Your poem sounds really good, it gives me a picture in my head. It looks like you had fun writing it.

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  2. AnonymousApril 2, 2019 at 4:33 PM

    Hi Charmony
    Your poem is is really cool because its like a map. And it gives a picture in my head.

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  3. AnonymousMay 1, 2019 at 5:16 PM

    Hi Charmony
    I like your poem because it gives me a picture in my head while
    I read it. I can imagine the bees buzzing around the flower.

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